Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6CPGtNMtAI&feature=youtu.be
Reflection: The only constructive feedback that I got on my last pitch was to work on making it a little bit smoother (although someone else said that it was very smooth- there's always room for improvement!). Aside from that, it was all positive responses for having a good hook, appropriate attire and a smooth delivery. I was sure to capitalize on my strengths while trying to make it even more refined and polished. Practice makes permanent!
What I changed: This time around, I tried something a little different with my hook and the setting in which I did it. I really feel as if I did an even better job of putting the viewer in the shoes of the customer and the user, making for a maximum impact when it came to presenting my product. I really enjoyed the change of pace, and it helped everything seem a lot smoother and more conversational. It said less "buy my product" and more "hey pal, you really could use this!".
Hi John! I definitely felt as if you were promoting your product in the "hey pal, you really could use this" tone. Your choice of setting was great and the way you began standing and then taking a seat made it seem very conversational. The way you went about it made you seem very confident in your product and proud of your product. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHi John. I definitely see the change you made from your last pitch to this one. You really maintained your professionalism while still making the viewer feel like you were carrying on a conversation. Like you said, there are always ways to improve yourself and your pitch! It can be very beneficial to switch it up. That way, you can discover what works best. Great work, John!
ReplyDeleteHi John,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your hook this time around, it definitely added some flair that drew me in. Also, the way you incorporated movement into your pitch made the whole beginning part seem much more organic and made me a bit more interested in your message, rather than a cold read pitch that comes off as impersonal. I thought the rest of the pitch was just as strong as your second one, but for me the intro change was gold! Awesome stuff!