Link to my Elevator Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c0ZYgJxn84A
Reflection:
Unfortunately, I didn't receive any negative or constructive feedback. Everything that I got was positive- people picking out things I did that they liked, and how they would use it in their pitches. This was a nice confidence boost, but not very good from a learning perspective. I did what I could to make it smoother and more refined to my market segment, but beyond that, I'd like to ask Dr./Prof. Pryor for more input.
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was great, I appreciated the professionalism you showed with your attire and how engaging you were by not reading off of a script and truly saying what you believed your product could do. The only constructive criticism that I can give is to maybe do a couple more test runs before your final cut to just make everything a bit smoother, but it was still definitely an awesome pitch.
Hey John,
ReplyDeleteAwesome pitch! Great job overall, I did love how you delivered your pitch it was very smooth and professional. I also have to acknowledge your immediate hook, you grasped my attention immediately then swung into the explanation very smoothly. It was pieced together very nicely, well-spoke, great deliverance and amazing execution.